Into the New World

Couldn't even make it past chapter 5. FL is "at the end of her rope" so goes to the room reserved for the most powerful person in order to offer herself up. WITHOUT BEING ASKED??? What on earth made get think that this WOULDN'T offend someone? Secondly, after they get into a fight, she kicks him, THEN WONDERS if she'd offended him. WHERE IS THE LOGIC?! Then, to top it all off, she RUNS AWAY after doing the deed, shocked, without getting any benefits. NEGATING HER ENTIRE PLAN OF SLEEPING WITH SOMEONE FOR BENEFITS?!Idk I can't deal with this kind of FL who doesn't have a brain. ML gets a shout out for sleeping with her only after confirming her identity, but what kind of lover would take advantage of someone who's only doing this because they don't have any other option?

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Hello everyone! This is a very shameless author review to give you a little insight into this novel before you head in on your own. For one, this novel is inspired by MVS loosely (I’ve never read the novel beyond four chapters) and has a heavy focus on military themes and urban fantasy/sci-fi elements. There will be a harem of about 4-5 and some quite unique kingdom building. MC is street smart and headstrong with few heroic qualities. You get his motivations pretty early on (chapter 1) and things develop from there. No NTR, no Yuri harem, and I try to give refreshing twists on pre-established cliches whenever I can. Any and all questions welcome below!

i like it very much and the story was also good

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Ice Phoenix menatap Vaun dengan terkejut dan buru-buru berkata, "Katakan, apa aturannya." Dia tidak bisa membiarkan kesempatan ini lewat begitu saja. Jika dia bisa memenangkan taruhan, dia akan tahu tentang Ice Jade Heart dari Vaun. Dia benar-benar ingin tahu misteri Ice Hade Ice yang diciptakan Vaun. Aura yang merusak gelap datang dari dalamnya tetapi bagian dalamnya dapat membantu orang meningkatkan esensi kehidupan mereka dan dapat meningkatkan proses budidaya dua kali lipat.

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